Hi Ricardo,
your picture is very nice for the first dive with a camera, but let us
compare your picture with the colemani picture from Perry. What do you
think, which image is more appealing. I think it’s the colemani from Perry
for several reasons.
1. Perry’s image clearly focus on one subject, while your picture has at least
two (two clown fishes) and the disturbing background.
2. Perry’s image uses several composition techniques. First it shows
perfectly how the shrimp uses its camouflage. These camouflage and the
coral forms nice patterns in the image. This is one of many composition
techniques. Another on is to use depth of field to focus on the main subject
and try to blur all other areas (this is why the second shrimp does not
disturb). He also didn’t placed the main subject in the middle rather on the
right side. This creates more attention.
For more techniques look at:
http://www.fodors.com/focus/focselect.cfm?catid=9
3. Some areas in your pictures show backscatter, dirt or reflections (the
bright spot on the clown fish for instance), which is not very appealing.
I couldn’t find any in Perry’s picture.
I like your picture, but honestly I don’t see it as a winner. I’m impressed
that one of your first shots underwater is done that well, but as a beginners
shot it has some missing things and failures as stated above.
I know there is no price for this contest and that our rules are strict, but we
see this contest as a possibility to let all the underwater photographs share
their pictures and discuss about it. This might help to improve their own
pictures.
I hope I could somehow “objectivly” explain my objection about your high
votes. I hope you see this as a feedback on your pictures which helps you
with your next underwater photographic attempts and I would like to see
some more of your pictures in this contest.
/lars
PS: The majority of your votes are from logins at pooles.rima-tde.net. Can
you explain why we should accept this?